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Dan Pace's avatar

Hands down, your best story. I almost stopped reading because it skeezed me out, but the twist brought it together perfectly. Awesome job.

Adam Karaoguz's avatar

Thank you, Brother!

b.ablemann's avatar

well done, was getting a bit creeped out, but all's well that ends well.

Rebecca Raguso Snyder's avatar

Women love these retribution stories!!! It was very good!!