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Sir, i like this one a lot. I think you have defined the territory pretty well, and articulated an approach that has a great probability for a successful completion. One slight irony is you have couched several arguments in lofty intellectual terms which are not accessible to all potential readers. I love the water analogies. I have an intelligent friend who has spent a considerable amount of time paddling many rivers, as well as other outdoor adventures, but i do not know if your lofty language would engage his intellect. He prefers class 4 & 5 rapids, but whatever floats your boat. Sometimes it's necessary to recapitulate all of the realms and rooms we can operate in, before we can fully sally forth.

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